There is nothing that thrills me more than a perfectly written sentence or paragraph. The kind that just stops you in your tracks. Words that you have to re-read two or three times and savour before you can carry on!
I tend to burn through books at breakneck speed so anything that makes me slow down and STOP, even for a second is to be treasured. In fact, sometimes I feel a little like Indiana Jones, uncovering these gems from where they are hidden in a sea of words.
So what exactly is it that makes a bit of prose just that little bit snappier than its peers? What makes it stand out from the crowd? Well I think it can be many things.
It can be a bit of cleverness – the kind where you pat yourself on the back for ‘getting it’ when maybe others wouldn’t. It can be a piece of terse dialogue where you can picture the exact expression on the character’s face as they deliver it. It can be the imperceptible shake of a head that speaks volumes.
Mostly though it is those bits where you think if someone made this book into a movie, there is no way they could adequately convey what this sentence just did. You’ve heard people say that a picture speaks a thousand words? Well I am sorry, but sometimes words just do it better.
Recently I’ve taken to marking these words with a post-it note just so I can come back and be inspired by them when battling writer’s block. Or even just to re-savour them! Here are a few of my favourites:
From Bill Bryson who has turned self-deprecation into an art form purely for the entertainment of his readers:
“I am not, I regret to say, a discreet and fetching sleeper. Most people when they nod off look as if they could do with a blanket. I look as if I could do with medical attention.” [From Down Under]
Or here’s Kylie Ladd in Last Summer when her character Joe is forced to take matters into his own hands after his advances are continually rebuffed by his wife:
“Joe climaxed in a rush, then leaned against the shower screen catching his breath. You knew things were desperate when you found yourself fantasising about f*cking your own wife.”
And finally, this from Peter Mayle in A Year in Provence. I have many post-it notes scattered throughout this entirely delightful book as Mayle can turn a phrase like few others. This paragraph is my favourite because it echoes something I think we’ve all done in our dreams:
“In the end, it had happened quickly – almost impulsively – because of the house. We saw it one afternoon and had mentally moved in by dinner.”
Kelly is a designer, writer and lover of all books – great and small. She is also a reformed over-committer and blogs about this at A Life Less Frantic.
So what about you? Do you find yourself wanting to get the highlighter out when you’re reading a book? Who are the authors that make you stop and just savour their work?







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The person, be it gentleman or lady, who has not pleasure in a good novel, must be intolerably stupid.”
― Jane Austen
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I love anything written by Scott Fitzgerald. He could make the most common or obscure things beautiful with the aesthetic expression of his words. Especially love Tender is the Night and Great Gatsby. His work is really exquisite.
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‘There is nowhere else I’d rather be, nothing else I would prefer to be doing. I am at the beach looking west with the continent behind me as the sun tracks down to the sea. I have my bearings.
Tim Winton – Land’s Edge
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Gabriel Garcia Marquez!!! And Lionel Shriver.
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I agree with Amee, To Kill a Mockingbird written by Haper Lee is absolutely the best book! It is a book that makes you laugh and cry alot. All the characters are fantastic but it is Atticus and Scout Finch that I love the most.
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I’ve never highlighted a book (goes against my code on the treatment of books), but there are many things that have made me stop and read them again and again. I did this many times in Harry Potter and other books but I have two favourites, one from Nicholas Sparks, the other from John Green.
“Dusk, I realised then, is just an illusion, because the sun is either above the horizon or below it. And that means the day and night are linked in a way that few things are; there cannot be one without the other, yet they cannot exist at the same time. How would it feel, I remember wondering, to be always together, yet forever apart?
Looking back, I find it ironic that she chose to read the letter at the exact moment that question popped into my head. It is ironic, of course, because I know the answer now. I know what it’s like to be day and night now; always together, forever apart.” ‘The Notebook’ by Nicholas Sparks.
“Just like that. From a hundred miles an hour to asleep in a nanosecond. I wanted so badly to lie down next to her on the couch, to wrap my arms around her and sleep. Not f**k, like in those movies. Not even have sex. Just sleep together, in the most innocent sense of the phrase. But I lacked the courage and she had a boyfriend and I was gawky and she was gorgeous and I was hopelessly boring and she was endlessly fascinating. So I walked back to my room and collapsed on the bottom bunk, thinking that if people were rain, I was drizzle and she was a hurricane.” ‘Looking for Alaska’ by John Green
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I recently read the Paris Wife by Paula McLain and really enjoyed it. Although the main character (Ernest Hemingway’s first wife) came across very young and immature, I loved this line:
“There are some who said I should have fought harder or longer than I did for my marriage, but in the end fighting for a love that was already gone felt like trying to live in the ruins of a lost city, I couldn’t bear it and so I backed away.”
I think that is exactly how you would feel.
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Harper Lee. To Kill a Mockingbird is a book that has stayed with me my entire (albeit short) life. The second-last page, when Scout walks Boo home reduces me to tears every single time I read it. Wonderful.
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David Sedaris.
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I’m currently reading Caitlin Moran’s How to be a Woman and there are so many funny lines in that book, I find myself laughing out loud constantly!
I have so many favourite authors but a few whose wordsmithing I love are Barbara Kingsolver, Tim Winton, Stephen King, Diana Gabaldon – all very different genres but amazing authors in their own right.
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C.S. Lewis. I love his writing, even more so now as an adult. His underlying themes, always of good versus evil and his beautiful characters are amazing. I have reread his books so many times over the years, it is like picking up an old friend, familiar and comforting.
And for easy reading of the action variety, I am very much in love with the Jack Reacher character written by Lee Child. What a mighty fine man!
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I just read this today. It’s from Christopher Hitchens’s autobiography, where he is describing his father’s funeral. I think it will stay with me for a long time.
❝I was able to see my father in his last repose before the screwing-on of the lid, and later to do for him what he had once done for me, and carry him on my shoulders.❞
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Aw I love this line!! Utterly poignant
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Kurt Vonnegut. Every book. Every sentence.
So it goes.
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“Simple dreams are the hardest to come true.” Looking for Alibrandi, Marlina Marchetta. That book really resonated with me as a teenager, I still read it every now and then.
“There’s always going to be bad stuff out there. But here’s the amazing thing — light trumps darkness, every time. You stick a candle into the dark, but you can’t stick the dark into the light.” Jodi Picoult, Change of Heart
“I love you,” he whispered, and that was the moment he knew what he was going to do. When you loved someone, you put their needs before your own. No matter how inconceivable those needs were; no matter how fucked up; no matter how much it made you feel like you were ripping yourself into pieces.”
Jodi Picoult, The Pact – also read this as a teenager and it completely changed (or shaped) the way I felt about suicide and relationships.
And of course, endless quotes by the great JK Rowling across the Harry Potter series. Here are a few of my favourites:
“If you want to know what a man’s like, take a good look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.” (Goblet of Fire)
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.” (Philosopher’s Stone)
“I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.” (Prisoner of Azkaban)
“Things we lose have a way of coming back to us in the end, if not always in the way we expect.” (Order of the Phoenix)
“We have to choose between what is right, and what is easy.” (Deathly Hallows)
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I love Jodi Picoult and JK Rowling. Harry Potter has some great lines. Pretty much anything Dumbledore says is quote-worthy, haha.
Jane Austen also has some great lines!
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I really enjoy Carlos Ruiz Zafon, one of many of my well loved authors. But he’s been on my mind lately so here are some quotes from his stories that I lovedL:
From Shadow of the Wind (brilliance in a book):
“Once, in my father’s bookshop, I heard a regular customer say that few things leave a deeper mark on a reader than the first book that finds its way into his heart. Those first images, the echo of words we think we have left behind, accompany us throughout our lives and sculpt a palace in our memory to which, sooner or later—no matter how many books we read, how many worlds we discover, or how much we learn or forget—we will return.”
“Bea says that the art of reading is slowly dying, that it’s an intimate ritual, that a book is a mirror that offers us only what we already carry inside us, that when we read, we do it with all our heart and mind, and great readers are becoming more scarce by the day.”
“Every book has a soul, the soul of the person who wrote it and the soul of those who read it and dream about it.”
And from The Angel’s Game:
“I stepped into the bookshop and breathed in that perfume of paper and magic that strangely no one had ever thought of bottling.”
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I’ve just started reading ‘The Book of Summers’ by Emylia Hall. I don’t know how good it will be but I’m already loving her language.
‘Marika loves and hates the book in almost equal measure. For when she turns the pages she is a time-traveller. When she turns the pages she is bound in chains.’
Later, she describes family as being like ‘rambling dinners with elbows on tables and old jokes kneaded and pulled like baking dough.’
I think I’m going to enjoy this writer! Other authors to savour are Markus Zusak and Jane Austen. I also love Thomas Hardy’s prose but he’s a bit heavy going for me these days
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Can’t remember now why I picked this book up but there are a few choice one-liners (nothing too profound, mind) eg
“Oye, chica, since when did cellulite ever deter passion?” The Aguero Sisters by Christina Garcia
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jodi picoult! love love love her books. always a twist at the end, which makes reading her books so much more exciting.
marian keyes. very entertaining.
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I’m a huge fan of Jodi Picoult too!
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I read over the weekend that Marian Keyes has a new book coming out in September. It’s called Mercy Close.
Should be worth the wait.
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What a lovely post! I’m often drawn to quotes that shape my life on the day and just fits.
Rob Lowe in Stories I only tell my friends: “So I came to the realisation: Nothing in life is unfair. It’s just life.”
Deborah Rodriguez in Little Coffee Shop of Kabul: “You will find that thing that makes you unafraid to die. That important thing that makes your life of value.”
I usually highlight things on my Kindle and it gets saved in the My Clippings folder so it’s easily accessible.
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I love what Anne Tyler writes and how she puts things.
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I also love Anne Tyler she is a wonderful storyteller and one of America’s national treasures. From Saint Maybe to The Accidental Tourist to
Digging to America. She is a beautiful writer. It is also difficult to find her books in secondhand book shops – I think it’s because people want to hold onto her books to read a second time around.
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“Anybody can look at a pretty girl and see a pretty girl. An artist can look at a pretty girl and see the old woman she will become. A better artist can look at an old woman and see the pretty girl that she used to be. But a great artist — a master — and that is what Auguste Rodin was — can look at an old woman, portray her exactly as she is… and force the viewer to see the pretty girl she used to be…. and more than that, he can make anyone with the sensitivity of an armadillo, or even you, see that this lovely young girl is still alive, not old and ugly at all, but simply prisoned inside her ruined body. He can make you feel the quiet, endless tragedy that there was never a girl born who ever grew older than eighteen in her heart…. no matter what the merciless hours have done to her. Look at her, Ben. Growing old doesn’t matter to you and me; we were never meant to be admired — but it does to them. Look at her!”
Robert Heinlein, Stranger in a Strange Land
I think most of my favourite quotes come from his books
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Oh, I love Sylvia Plath:
“There was a uniformity to their faces, as if they had lain for a long time on a shelf, out of the sunlight, under siftings of pale, fine dust.”
I also love the line from Kurt Vonnegut’s The Slaughterhouse Five, one of the character’s last words before he dies: “Everything was beautiful, and nothing hurt”
I’ve taken to underlining beautiful sentences in pencil, so I can go back and find them later, and I discovered recently that my dad does this too!
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My favourite book is The Solitare Mystery by Jostien Gaarder. Fave line from the book… ‘If the human brain was simple enough for us to understand, we would still be so stupid that we couldn’t understand it.’
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Possibly my favourite quote of all time is from Samuel Johnson:
“The power, indeed, of every individual is small, and the consequence of his endeavours imperceptible, in a general prospect of the world. Providence has given no man ability to do much, that something might be left for every man to do. The business of life is carried on by a general co-operation; in which the part of any single man can be no more distinguished, than the effect of a particular drop when the meadows are floated by a summer shower: yet every drop increases the inundation, and every hand adds to the happiness or misery of mankind.”
Makes me feel wonderful and oh, the words!
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“But I lacked the courage and she had a boyfriend and I was gawky and she was gorgeous and I was hopelessly boring and she was endlessly fascinating. So I walked back to my room and collapsed on the bottom bunk, thinking that if people were rain, I was drizzle and she was a hurricane.” Looking for Alaska by John Green.
I haven’t actually read this book but I read the quote yesterday and it really stuck with me!
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I read an early 20th century detective story at my Granny’s house many, many years ago on a boring, rainy Sunday afternoon. I can’t remember who wrote it or what it was called, but this line has always stayed with me:
‘And thither, at once, he betook himself.’
That dude didn’t just go – nope, he ‘betook himself’.
I have read so many novels since then (rarely excited by non-fiction). But that line has always stuck.
Favorite authors: Margaret Attwood! Margaret Attwood! The late great Carol Shields. Murakami. Joyce Carol Oates has some corkers.
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Jeanette Winterson.
“It was evening. The air like a kiss.
I was sitting on a low wall opposite the Quisiana. The paparazzi were joking with one another. A man with an acordian playing on a balcony to a party of Japanese. I had been sitting for a couple of hours, carefully concealed behind my Dolce & Gabbana sunglasses, frames as thin as the slip of a burka. I had not intended to be fashionable, merely I had bought my sunglasses in Italy, which amounts to the same thing.
I was typing on my laptop, trying to move this story on, trying to avoid endings, trying to collide the real and the imaginary worlds, trying to be sure which is which.”
The Power Book.
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‘Live each day as if it’s your last’, that was the conventional advice, but really, who had the energy for that? What if it rained or you felt a bit glandy? It just wasn’t practical. Better by far to simply try and be good and courageous and bold and to make a difference. Not change the world exactly, but the bit around you. Go out there with your passion and your electric typewriter and work hard at…something. Change lives through art maybe. Cherish your friends, stay true to your principles, live passionately and fully and well. Experience new things. Love and be loved, if you ever get the chance.
David Nicholls- One Day
Also agree with many of the below. Bill Bryson, Jane Austen (sigh!).
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oh, I just loved that whole book! I devoured it in one greedy, rainy afternoon. I loved it so much that as soon as it was finished, I wanted to read it again.
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Marian Keyes – especially in “Rachel’s Holiday”. My fave book ever by my fave author… I love her writing.
I feel the same towards Marian Keyes as I do with Zoe Foster… Like we’re long lost friends, haha.
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So many lovely lines from Jeannette Winterson in The Passion:
“I say I’m in love with her. What does that mean?
It means I review my future and my past in the light of this feeling. It is as though I wrote in a foreign language that I am suddenly able to read. Wordlessly, she explains me to myself. LIke genius she is ignorant of what she does.”
and
“You play, you win, you play, you lose. You play. It’s the playing that’s irresistible. Dicing from one year to the next with the things you love, what you risk reveals what you value.”
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I see you are a Winterson fan too – did you know she is coming to Australia next month for a book tour? So exciting!
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LOVE this and can so relate. There are so many sentences in my lifetime of loving books that I have savoured and am so glad I am not alone in this little habit
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“The discovery of a toy duck in the soap dish, presumably the property of some former juvenile visitor, contributed not a little to this new and happier frame of mind. What with one thing and another, I hadn’t played with toy ducks in my bath for years, and I found the novel experience most invigorating. For the benefit of those interested, I may mention that if you shove the thing under the surface with the sponge and then let it go, it shoots out of the water in a manner calculated to divert the most careworn. Ten minutes of this and I was enabled to return to the bedchamber much more the old merry Bertram.”
Wodehouse – always perfect.
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‘I was trying to Do Life, instead of living it. Tyring to get it right instead of just getting it.’ Julietta Jameson in Me Myself and Lord Byron
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I adore Ian McEwan, Alice Sebold, Jonathan Safran Foer, Steven Chbosky, Anais Nin, J.D Salinger, Hunter S. Thompson, Oscar Wilde, Jane Austen, Emily Bronte and about a million others I’ve forgotten. I love them all.
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I love the works of Christopher Hitchens, Truman Capote, Haruki Murakami, Ian McEwan and Colm Toibin. All have a beautiful way with words.
And as another commenter mentioned, the last line of The Book Thief. One of the most beautiful and memorable lines ever written.
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i’m having trouble uploading all my favourites because they’re being registered as spam but hopefully at least these two will work!
“Sando was good at portraying the moment you found yourself at your limit, when things multiplied around you like a halluciation. He could describe the weird, reptilian thing that happened to you: the cold, supercharged certainty which overtook your usually dithering mind, the rest of the world in a slow motion blur around you, the tunnel vision, the surrender that confidence finally became. And when he talked about the final rush, the sense of release you feel at the end, skittering out to safety in the beautiful, deep channel, Eva sometimes sank back with her eyes closed and her teeth bared, as though she understood only too well. It’s like you come pouring back into yourself, said Sando one afternoon. Like you’ve exploded and all the pieces of you are reassembling themselves. You’re new. Shimmering. Alive.” Tim Winton, Breath
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“They were beyond the present, outside time, with no memories and no future. There was nothing but obliterating sensation, thrilling and swelling, and the sound of fabric on fabric and skin on fabric as their limbs slid across each other in this restless, sensuous wrestling. … They moved closer, deeper and then, for seconds on end, everything stopped. Instead of an ecstatic frenzy, there was stillness. They were stilled not by the astonishing fact of arrival, but by an awed sense of return – they were face to face in the gloom, staring into what little they could see of each other’s eyes, and now it was the impersonal that dropped away.” Ian McEwan- Atonement (my absolute favourite book of all time; words like i’d never heard them before)
… i’m obsessed by beautiful sentences- great post!
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“It’s a funny thing about mothers and fathers. Even when their own child is the most disgusting little blister you could ever imagine, they still think that he or she is wonderful” – Matilda, Roald Dahl
Roald Dahl never failed to make me laugh as a young girl (and even now)!
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‘Suppose that you and I were sitting in a quiet room overlooking a garden, chatting and sipping at our cups of green tea while we talked about something that had happened a long while ago, and I said to you, “That afternoon when I met so-and-so…was the very best afternoon of my life, and also the very worst afternoon.” ‘
Arthur Golden – Memoirs of a Geisha
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Ian McEwan and Jonathan Franzen – several times I have stopped, gone back re-read and even spoken aloud some of their sentences.
Nice to see you on here!
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Thank you lovely!
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That’s when you know it is good…..when you just have to read it out loud.
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“Too much imagination can be bad though. I once met an imaginary friend named Pteradactyl whose eyes were stuch on the ends of these two gangly, green antennas. His huiman friend probably thought they looked cool, but poor Pterodactyl couldn’t focus on anything to save his life. He told me that he constantly felt sick to his stimach and was always tripping over his own feet, which were just fuzzy shadows attached to his legs. His human friend was so obsessed with Pterodactyl’s head and those eyes that he had never bothered to think about anything below Pterodactyl’s waist.
This is not unusual.” Memoirs of an Imaginary Friend by Matthew Green. Truly wonderful.
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“Soul is a verb.”
That’s David Mitchell from The Thousand Autumns of Jacob de Zoet. Can’t say I loved the book very much (though I’d highly recommend any of his others), but that’s a quote that has stayed with me.
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I loved this line too. Wrote it in my quote book.
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There’s nothing I love more than a beautiful quote.
My favourite quote in the world is from Blind Willow, Sleeping Woman, by Haruki Murakami:
“She waited for the train to pass. Then she said, “I sometimes think that people’s hearts are like deep wells. Nobody knows what’s at the bottom. All you can do is imagine by what comes floating to the surface every once in a while.”
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Gosh this one needs to go on a poster!
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That is beautiful. I have always meant to read Haruki Murakami… not I just HAVE to!
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‘A high street with a strip club is like a smile with a tooth knocked out.’ Caitlin Moran, How To Be A Woman.
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That one’s a pearler Kate
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I agree with the Terry Pratchett comments below – he is the king of puns, and sly, grab-you-while-you’re-looking-the-other-way jokes.
In a similar vein, Douglas Adams would be my top pick for lines that make me catch my breath, laugh out loud, bug other people with. And while humour was his forte, he wove in such heartbreaking poignancy as well. As his surname starts with “A” he is at the very top of my bookshelves, and I don’t have a ladder, so excuse any inaccuracies, but one of my favourites is “it tasted almost, but not quite, entirely unlike tea”. He had such a gift for turning our expectations of what a sentence should be, how it should start and finish, on their head. The Long Dark Tea Time of the Soul is my favourite of his.
Margaret Atwood is a consistent performer, she is an amazingly descriptive writer who manages not to fall into the purple prose trap (I’m looking at you, Jodi Picoult). I have so many “exactly!” moments with her.
My favourite book of late, to be treasured in it’s entirety, is Susannah Clarke’s Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell. I don’t even know where to start describing it…it has everything, one amazing, beautifully written package. Stunning. My hat off to any studio that tries to make it into a movie!
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“When the Drink button was pressed it made an instant but highly detailed examination of the subject’s taste buds, a spectroscopic analysis of the subject’s metabolism and then sent tiny experimental signals down the neural pathways to the taste centers of the subject’s brain to see what was likely to go down well. However, no one knew quite why it did this because it invariably delivered a cupful of liquid that was almost, but not quite, entirely unlike tea.”
“In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move.”
http://www.goodreads.com/author/quotes/4.Douglas_Adams?page=1
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I loved Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell! I have read it twice and it is so well written and so absorbing. Love your choices here!
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Love love love this one. It is so restrained and then kapow!
‘Being ‘in love’ first moved them to promise fidelity: this quieter love enables them to keep that promise. It is on this love that the engine of marriage is run: being in love was the explosion that started it.”
C.S Lewis – Mere Christianity
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Love it – just perfect!
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Jane Austen, Persuasion:
“I can listen no longer in silence. I must speak to you by such means as are within my reach. You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope. Tell me not that I am too late, that such precious feelings are gone for ever. I offer myself to you again with a heart even more your own than when you almost broke it, eight years and a half ago.”
*swoon*
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I KNOW!! *tears* (of joy) <3
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Happy sigh! Persuasion – Pride and Prejudice for grown-ups ….
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Yep that’s the one. And I just went to Bath. Happy happy girl.
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“Will you look at us by the river! The whole restless mob of us on spread blankets in the dreamy briny sunshine skylarking and chiacking about for one day, one clear, clean, sweet day in a good world in the midst of our living. Yachts run before an unfelt gust with bagnecked pelicans riding above them, the city their twitching backdrop, all blocks and points of mirror light down to the water’s edge.” Cloudstreet, Tim Winton
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I love this quote. I love Tim Winton. His writing inspires me and I devour it regularly.
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What is it about Winton? He captures something deep in my psyche…..It is as if he has been with me right through my childhood. Those years when everything was new and raw and innocent….
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“My brother ate his corn on the cob like a normal person, instead of typewriter style; usually he’d tap the cob at the end of a row and ding.”
From ‘The Girls Guide To Hunting and Fishing” by Melissa Bank. One of my top 5 books. Every line sings. She cracks me up.
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“Tuesday was moderately fucked by ten.”
Zigzag Street by Nick Earls. LAUGH OUT LOUD HILARIOUS.
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Nick Earls – he makes me laugh every day!
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Awesome quotes…. and authors I’ve never read. This post has got me started on a To Read list – which is great as whenever I’m at the library my mind goes blank!
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I’m loving a line from a Betjeman poem, Myfanwy. David Essex sang it so sweetly many years ago:
‘Finger marked pages of Rackham’s Hans Anderson’
I love how Betjeman says so much with so few words.
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‘She looks out hospital windows and imagines how martians would see us’. Anne Tyler, The Accidental Tourist.
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